We were Creating Bio Poems to tell a Story about them. It was Challenging because we had to come up with different ideas for each line. It was fun to go back and read our finished work.
Hi Lara this is Michaela from Yaldhurst Model school This is a very interesting blog and you would love to go to Tokyo and Japan. That is a very crazy place. I like it. Lara I think this blog would be good with a title. You like snakes not many people do not like snakes because they bite you and can kill you. I do not like snakes but that is me and my thoughts. Kind regards Michaela
Hi Lara, This is Albin from Yaldhurst Model School.
I really liked your poem. It looks cool in that fabulous border etc... I really like the way you used the sizes of the text to confirm certain meanings.
For improvement maybe you could add a bit more text...like an introduction and an ending or something. It would look cool with this though.
Kia Ora Lara! My name is Lucy from Wesley Intermediate school. I think you would really love Tokyo as it is an amazing place. What is your favorite species of snake? Mine is the mamba.
Hi Lara this is Michaela from Yaldhurst Model school
ReplyDeleteThis is a very interesting blog and you would love to go to Tokyo and Japan. That is a very crazy place. I like it.
Lara I think this blog would be good with a title. You like snakes not many people do not like snakes because they bite you and can kill you. I do not like snakes but that is me and my thoughts.
Kind regards
Michaela
Hi Lara,
ReplyDeleteThis is Albin from Yaldhurst Model School.
I really liked your poem. It looks cool in that fabulous border etc... I really like the way you used the sizes of the text to confirm certain meanings.
For improvement maybe you could add a bit more text...like an introduction and an ending or something. It would look cool with this though.
Kind regards,
Albin.
Kia Ora Lara! My name is Lucy from Wesley Intermediate school. I think you would really love Tokyo as it is an amazing place. What is your favorite species of snake? Mine is the mamba.
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